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It was the first day I felt pretty,
I felt beautiful.
He's told me a billion times,
But I never believed him.

My eyes were a gilttery blue,
My lips a glossy red.
Gold around my neck,
And on my ears.

My dress as short as humanly possible,
It shone under the silver lights.
He took my hand,
But I let go.

He didn't love me.
It was all a lie.
And all on this special njght.
She told me everything.

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I'm not so sure about this one but please comment below what you think!! Love you all xxx

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thevisibilitycloak's picture

wow! you are a fantastic

wow! you are a fantastic writer! This poem is fantastic and really shows you learning your own worth and beauty!

RedAsBlood's picture

Thanks!! That means a lot :)

Thanks!! That means a lot :)


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

lovelife123's picture

I love it, its amazing! :)

I love it, its amazing! :)


"Everybody is a genuis. But if you judge a fish on it's ability to climb a tree, it will live it's whole life believing that it is stupid"
Albert Einstein

RedAsBlood's picture

Thanks!

Thanks!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

pldappls's picture

this one is great too. you

this one is great too. you can see your anguish and i guess 'disdain' pretty strongly in this. it's also emotional without being too 'emo'. you're an awesome writer in my opinion. im gonna read/comment the rest of your stuff tonight after my friend gets here and leaves in like 15 mins.

fucking awesome.

RedAsBlood's picture

That means so much too me. I

That means so much too me. I can't thank you enough!! You just made my day. I really need people like too keep pushing me forward so that I can accomplish the best I can. Thanks again


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)