That day

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I remember that day,
Oh so clearly,
In my mind it replays,
Over and over again.

It was August 30th,
The day we first met.
We were taking Drama,
And we made a bet.

Whoever did better,
Would win the joy.
Of being the best,
I beat that boy.

It was a couple weeks later,
My best friend was your mate.
I asked him to help me,
But he said it was too late.

Now he's got a girlfriend,
And shes as mean as him.
Is this the end?
He's broken me,

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pldappls's picture

ty for your comment <3 this

ty for your comment <3

this is great really i love your wording and i don't think it's whiny like a lot of stuff like this is.

you're really talented and you're only going to get better with time.

RedAsBlood's picture

Thanks! Please keep reading

Thanks! Please keep reading my poems in future, and im sure they'll be better :)


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)