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The One
You are the one that speaks to me
The one that moulds me
The one that holds me
The one the hates me
The one that elates me
The one that berates me
The one that mates with me
The one that's there for me
The one that pulls me up
The one that tears me down
The one that mirrors me
The one that teaches me
The one I reminisce about
The one I hiss about
The one that I want
The one I long for
The one I need
The one that's truly unique
The one I want
The one I love
You are the one and only one
SSo good to see you back!
SSo good to see you back! great piece. I think it could do with a few less you ares forgive me for tinkering but I would only suggest if I think it imperative that it might be of some faint use to see it a little differently
You are the one that speaks to me
The one that moulds me
The one that holds me
The one the hates me
The one that elates me
The one that berates me
The one that mates with me
The one that's there for me
The one that pulls me up
The one that tears me down
The one that mirrors me
The one that teaches me
The one I reminisce about
The one I hiss about
The one that I want
The one I long for
The one I need
The one that's truly unique
The one I want
The one I love
You are the one and only one
how does that run?
This is a great poem with great structure they are one very lucky person! You seem so very honest and I cant help but feel that you are very sincere! I am enjoying your writing! Have a very Merry Christmas and very Awesome New Year! ps The One is a great title! PSS please feel free to totally ignore anything I have suggested because at the end of the day it is awesome because its an expression of your beautiful soul! I cant wait to see more! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks SS. I agree and take
Thanks SS. I agree and take it on board. This inspirational piece came from the heart in the early hours of the am. She is such great catch.