Last flight

Lots of rain and little sun

Season is changing it starting to warm

im a bud on a tree, i can't wait to bloom

there's millions of us, all sizes and shapes

we bless u colors, beauty and shade

when it starts getting cold, I fall from the sky

iv lived long enough, it's my turn to fly.

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KindredSpirit's picture

Like this

KS

9inety's picture

Hey, I am a proponent of

Hey, I am a proponent of spelling

so if a work

makes me work harder than necessary to understand the context I generally dismiss the poem all together

editing is part of the process

that said you could be a great poet if you tried to be a great poet

not judging just saying

I like your poems

I  DON'T LIKE TWEETING POEMS

OLD FASHION THAT WAY I GUESS!!!

 

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

allets's picture

Nice Poem

I am "...a bud on a tree..." too. Loved: "...we bless u colors..."  :D ~allets~