Poorly Planted

Holding on to the thought of letting go.
Letting go the thought of holding on.
You planted the seed, but gave it nothing to grow.
Buried beneath the dirt of your lies for way too long.

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battlepink's picture

I'm a big fan of the short

I'm a big fan of the short stuff with a powerful inside....you hit the mark in my eyes.

Very nice write.

saiom's picture

"the seed....Buried beneath

"the seed....Buried beneath the dirt of your lies for way too long."
very incisive line.. grabs people...
could it be possible that the dirt of her lies could make the seed grow?