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radium infinitus
the words whisper
they slip
into the wind
their coarse unset
as their wings
set to breeze
their very utterence
holds existence
between
the moment
of realization
and ignorance
clarity
becomes
the warrior unseen
as the
universe
continues
in its cold
spiral
Excellent. Definately a cut above the usual random poem.
Good day
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This poem is interesting. U r good poet.
Have a nice and beautiful life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~My Best Wishes~
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I like your style of writing. Keep Flowin'!
I don't critique to many poems cause to be honest most of what I find on here is basic formulatic drivel. But this was above that, it was very well written. Keep up the good work
I felt you took a short cut on the ending...words taking on a physical form on the wind is intriguing...and the juxta between clarity and unseen warrior...then the clique ending. Interesting title as well...brillance that is continuous? or a radius that is forever?
I want to know more.
Debbie
Very good work. I love the play on words and the word combinations used. Peace and Blessings!
Excellent! I could feel the wheels of my mind moving with this one. Malicious gossip would be honed and whispered and slipped into the speech.... or so many other things left unsaid that it makes this piece all the more special. I am so glad to find a well-written work in the random selection. Of course, that is what it is--random selection.
Thanks,
Jessica
And thus be the cold rude awakening of life.
A peeling of the conditoned mask.
An intriguing poem.Quite profound.
Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.
Yes, I liked this, clarity becomes the warrior unseen. It's nice to see a well-crafted poem among the also-rans that usually are chosen for the random poem.
Ken
My Secret River