UNFATHOMABLE AND HEAVENLY

The monsoon clouds move
round and round
my thirsty heart yearns a drink.

You and I
relive our romance
in our sweet sweet world of dreams.

Let it rain
More and more for hours
till I find beauty on this world.

Our love is
O my beloved one
A page from God's poetry book.

Ask the breeze
and it will also say
that divine love is uncommon.

Emerald
blue green lovely eyes
With the look of love I crave...

Uncommon
My life and love are:
unfathomable and heavenly!

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My dearest friend, Another

My dearest friend,
Another beautiful poem, it flows and is like a sweet serenade, but I have made a few changes and I think it sounds better and flows smoother. Have a look

The monsoon clouds move
round and round
my thirsty heart yearns a drink.
You and I
relive our romance
in our sweet sweet world of dreams.
Let it rain
More and more for hours
till I find beauty on this world.
Our love is
O my beloved one
A page from God's book of poetry
Ask the breeze
and it will say
that divine love is rare.
Emerald
blue green lovely eyes
With the look of love I crave...
Uncommon
Our lives and love are:
unfathomable and heavenly!