Bury my heart, on a un-known beach.

Take my heart away,
and bury it in the sand.
Bury it somewhere on a beach,
in a place far away from me.
Bury it on a soft warm place,
with water of crystal blue,
and sand grains of white.
Bury it where there are shells,
of differnt colors and shapes,
and place a shell on top of the grave.
Cause then nobody would know,
which place was mind, cause shells
are scattered through out the beach.
Nobody would know, where i buried, it.

Take my heart away, and bury it,
on a beach far away from me.
Take that shovel kid, and take your yellow pail,
and dig a hole, and fill it up with the wet sand.
Keep digging, till you get a hole, at least 6 feet deep,
and drop my heart inside, and toss the sand from your pail,
and fill the hole up to the top.
Dont worry, ill be ok, just keep covering it up.
Then pat the sand down, smooth it out.
And place a shell over it.
And then walk away.
Leave, my grave, leave my heart,
ill be ok, ill still be me,
just with out the pain,
that people cause when they brake my heart.
Cause now, my heart is gone, and buried on a
un known beach.
They wont be able to find it, unless you say something.
So keep your lips closed, it will be our little secret.
SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Dont say a word!

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MatthewWayne's picture

I must agree with the others,

I must agree with the others, I see lots of emotion behind your writting and written very well :)


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

Elfy's picture

lol Thank you i appricate

lol Thank you i appricate that. I tend to write whats on my heart and on my mind lol :)


-Elfy*

twisted_soul's picture

I will find your heart. no

I will find your heart. no matter were you hide it. its somthing I crave, and i wont stop till I'm dead, or I find it. Hide it from the evil people, who take advantage of it, hide it were you feel right. If someone loves you enough, truly, they will know were it is hidden and will find it slowly, holding it, warming it, loving it. You can't hide things from the ones you love, because there is a trust. a trust that you can tell them anything. <3

Elfy's picture

IF i hide it, it will be

IF i hide it, it will be really hard to find, almost impossibly. Im a really good hider. Even when you trust them, they dont know everything, and they'll have to look through me, to see what lies on the other side.


-Elfy*

Adam아담's picture

sooooo yeah, quite honest...

sooooo yeah, quite honest... wanting good, wanting joy, wanting wholeness, when you are faced with brokenness... I appreciate this poem because its so open and truthful; I see a real human heart when reading this poem.


Cheers,
Adam_San

Elfy's picture

lol Thank you. I appricate

lol Thank you. I appricate the comment. :)
IM glad you enjoyed it, and thank you that means alot.
Hope to see more comments from you.


-Elfy*