Faith Built - Crazy Monkey Bars II

You have direct access,
but your calling Collect
passing the buck with no luck,
deeper in debt,
you'll never learn
until you earn a deeper respect,
for those who strangled life
like a noose on the neck
Never even felt the whip,
but tainted by a lack of intellect,
so pursue the Good book,
for dialect
still Scaling the walls trying to fix yourself
not knowing the road you've been dealt
Only to find there's no enemies left
your whole life you've been opposing yourself
Completely smothered by doubt
now look at yourself,
who’s servicing who?
Been out of touch so long
You've forgot your role as a servant to Him
Even after the cleanse cycle was over
You acted as if you’ve been forgotten, Love strangled
Not listening, you’ve fallen victim
and did not realize your faiths adulterated
Now get on your shepherd boy swag, King David
you’ve already Graduated from lions and bears to giants, Sling Major
The barriers been broken, direct access
Start embracing haters, you’ll make’em livid
now that your educated, show’em your ledger
now open the Bible Gates
And wash, rinse and lather with the scrub of His unction
Now watch as the flood wash away the suds of corruption,
Now you, question MY connection?
I've already cast my vote for re-election
Control, alt, delete; start it over
Now stop stallin,
get with Christ,
become a true baller
Like Kobe in his prime
Now trust in the plan
and illuminate through the valley; rebirth
it's black and white like Obama,
can't miss it, black mamba,
it's discussion open,
chime in at anytime
I’m anticipating,
like waiting for that phone call
to hear Him say
Well done my son, great job!
Now let’s praise God so loud we shake the stars

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Formaly known as Crazy Monkey Bars.

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Seraphim's picture

Much better, and still keeps

Much better, and still keeps the presence of it's predecessor. Great job! ~Seraphim~


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SSmoothie's picture

good getting better!!!

the whole poem is sounding more put together but it goes from modern to ancient with the analogies separated rather than drawing in links. I tend to agree two seprate poems or more references between timeframes to establish a link :)


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