While you were sleeping
I got up and slipped outside.
So that when you woke up,
You would be surprised
Cause the plan that I had
Was long in the making,
Something that you'd never forget,
It would have everyone talking.
Everything was perfect,
I had everything planned
I wish I could see your face
When I showed my hand.
You knew that I was planning something,
But I couldn't let you know what
All your friends knew,
They were all in on it too.
So you ran downstairs
And you opened your eyes,
Looking for your special
Little secret surprise
All you could see was that
Everything had changed
So surprise..
You'll never see me again.
wow it's almost like soemone was planning to marry someone and then found out they were cheating, I really like how its kinda telling a story but then bang it's not what you think, I love when poems floor you like that!
keep it up
ash
Much Love
Ashley
congratulations, it keep getting better just the trust.