You froze at the words of my romantic embrace,
Because you didn't understand what I meant.
"You seem so happy" For once she isn't wrong,
She'll be my inspiration all night long.
The minutes have vanished to the hourglass of vanity,
They've gone past before my eyes.
But you whisked me away, in your arms and smiled,
As we drowned at my expense.
We've got one beautiful day,
In a miserable week,
And what a beautiful day it was…
We've got one beautiful day,
In a miserable week,
And what a beautiful day it was.
"I can't wait to wake up, to see what you'll say"
I'm glad we made the most of today.
Tomorrow night, I’ll not know myself,
But will I want to without you?
This poem is really pretty good actually, I especially liked the first part. Great job.
Nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss
I honestly love ever word of that poem
you've got alot of talent
I'm sending this to my best friend
much love
ash
Much Love
Ashley
I like the end of this one, very sweet.
for the record, nicole, or nikki_pot_pie is my best friend
so I did send that to my best friend
again I read this poem I still liked it as much as the first time
much love ash
Much Love
Ashley