Pure white roses
Who are you?
Curiosity on my mind
Tell me your secret ambitions
Your reverie of passion
Spill your dreams of orange and violet
Watercolor stained perfection
Are you envious of the sun and moon?
Burning bright with brilliance
Seemingly content
You stay white
Fearful of taking chances
great job
I've read through a few of what you've posted on the site and you have a lot of potential with your writing... Your imagery is strong and your vocabulary is excellent for somebody your age, keep writing! Best wishes
Beautiful words and a
Beautiful words and a beautiful picture portrayed also a beautiful poem. You must have a beautiful outlook.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you, very much. I do
Thank you, very much. I do try to have what you would call a beautiful outlook. When I start to think of things negatively, I try to remember how much you need darkness to make light brighter. Maybe thats even why we do have negative thoughts sometimes? Who knows... :)
-Destinee
excellent
Very thought provoking, and well written. I really enjoy reading poetry that asks something. Not necessarily myself, but the muse.
Thank you. I did alot of
Thank you. I did alot of wondering that day about many things.
-Destinee
beautiful lines, a fine read
beautiful lines, a fine read :)
best wishes, keep writin
Thank you:) I appreciate that
Thank you:) I appreciate that and I will :)
-Destinee