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Live hearty
And make no rival tonight

 

Freely staring into tranquilizing pools
These lovely portals of enthralling nature

emerald or cocoa,

hazel or steel

or winter blue
while waxing poetic of our past deeds

 

Existing to be in the presence of this audience
I will sign on the dotted line for this every day...
To sit under these restaurant lights
 and reminisce about our wooden grooves
 and how we carved ourselves out of raw materials
 into forces of nature

Author's Notes/Comments: 

12.23.11 - formerly The Compass Is Pointing North, also formerly Pizza Plant, First Date

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Beavis's picture

Well done

Great writing

deepblue's picture

thank you Beave

I greatly respect your work so it means a lot to hear your praise :)

running_with_rabbits's picture

thnaks for the share

I really njoyed that :) I even read it aloud


Much Love

Ashley

deepblue's picture

thank you very much RWR

keep writin :)

SSmoothie's picture

I liked this.

I liked this.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

deepblue's picture

me too lol thank you

me too lol thank you

Fitzgerald's picture

You are an awesome writer.

You are an awesome writer. Huge fan of yours.

deepblue's picture

thank you very much fitzgerald

I don't know how 'awesome' I am but I appreciate the compliment :) all I can really add is that I make every effort to write from the heart, I try to see either the beauty or the tragedy of a situation and try to convey it as best I can, that's probably my best definition of poetry..at least how I interpret it.

Fitzgerald's picture

Well I've enjoyed all that

Well I've enjoyed all that you have posted so far... That's a great definition of poetry. It's one the the best art forms out there.

deepblue's picture

agreed sir

Poetry's definitely my favorite form of expression, no doubt about it. Thank you once again, keep writing and I'll surely do the same