I, too, applaud the title, and the penultimate line---which are both delightfully suggestive. The poem is, as customary in the work of this Poet, skillfully wrought, and the short lines give it a compelling energy that continues to resonate even after the final line.
Thank you Starward. The poetential (potential) to suggest thought and persuasion is in a poet's arsenal and always available. The energy that can be compressed in shorter line allow for them to be strung along and produce a multiple rippling of thought and image which can be very exciting to form and to read.
I, too, applaud the title,
I, too, applaud the title, and the penultimate line---which are both delightfully suggestive. The poem is, as customary in the work of this Poet, skillfully wrought, and the short lines give it a compelling energy that continues to resonate even after the final line.
Starward becoming J-Called
Thank you Starward. The
Thank you Starward. The poetential (potential) to suggest thought and persuasion is in a poet's arsenal and always available. The energy that can be compressed in shorter line allow for them to be strung along and produce a multiple rippling of thought and image which can be very exciting to form and to read.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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