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You gave me a contusion

the words you spoke to me

How caustic to believe

one would do such things

Betrayed I feel

experiencing no tomorrow

and only the numbness

of the festering distrust,

a thing to replace my belief

when we shared Time together

Happy moments caught in the clock

seem to disappear quickly

till I stand alone

with the images gone complete

to sour the tongue

What happened?

To surrender yourself to offensiveness

by which inundate the plains

with these tears of mine;

a total discomfort to credibility

that you were true to me

My eyes curdle

seeing you've changed yourself

to something you're not, perhaps

Now we head off forever more

though we crossed once

walking along the highway

I will never forget

I hope you receive happiness

as I bear no hatred

and as I can forgive your actions

although it is unforgivable

You see, no need to be angry

for we are similar

to the very core of us,

We live

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Have you ever had one of those people who are so obnoxious, you wanted to slap them with a belt to the face, even though they were once kind to you in the past?  Someone changed to a way I didn't like, especially something that isn't that person anymore.  We used to be very close but now, we rarely talk.  Good thing too, because though I've forgiven that person for being a total, obnoxious bitch, the next time I'd see that person, if that person ever did it to me again, I'd tear her hair out from her head, seriously.

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©4 May 2007 - 3:24am — bluewave
29 February 2008 - 11:09pm — Nicolas Stevens (not verified)
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I know the feeling, sadly.
Wonderfully written - wish I had such a wide vocabulary. ^^

4 May 2007 - 3:45am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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yeah I can relate to this one,based on two escapades of late which I've written about. You know what I'm talking about..

4 May 2007 - 5:37am — Alan Cheng (not verified)
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It's crazy and insane when it comes to people who change into something that we don't want them to be, and yes, often at times, they become obnoxious!! It's funny that you wrote this, because I once knew this guy who was gay, and now he claims that he's not gay, and that he was changed by the life of God and Jesus Christ, and yet, he's been spreading that around to almost everyone he sees on school campus!! He even told my boyfriend about it in Spanish, and after that, my boyfriend came towards me and said, "Um, ok. Yeah, sure". I was like, "It's great to feel the love of Jesus Christ and the life of God, but why is he spreading it all over the place in a ton of times that we can barely count anymore of it?" Some people may be changed, and some people may not. For me, I've tried to change everything about myself once before, even with the life of God, but you know what? Everytime I tried to change myself with the light of God, I feel as if I've become even gayer than ever. LOL. I'm not saying that it's bad to share the light of God and everything, but that he's been talking about it non-stop!! As good as it is to receive the love of Christ, it was a hell of a lot annoying when I stood there hearing them talk and talk and talk about it, over, and over again!! He never used to do that!!

4 May 2007 - 4:21am — Sharon Wunsch (not verified)
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The hurt and disappointment is very clear. Sorry.