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Sweetened pumpkin pie

Made ready with hot coffee

Grant me one slice please

When it’s forty-nine degrees

And the floor freezes my feet

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If you ever had steaming pumpkin pie with coffee in the morning then you know what I mean...

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:57am
©8 March 2007 - 2:34am — bluewave
21 March 2007 - 11:19am — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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I've never had it, but you make it sound so damn good :) Lovely piece.

8 March 2007 - 3:37am — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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sounds good but I don't like pumpkin pie, give me mince,apple,keylime,peach,blueberry or strawberryrubarb..Hot coffee any time but only high octane none of this decafe garbage..Also pies from scratchnone of this box mix or frozen pop in oven deal..