Neighbourhood Stroll

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Neighbourhood Stroll



The night was warm with nary a breeze.The neighbourhood where I live was resting at 9.00 p.m after a hot sweltering summer day.Air was heavy with moisture.I was clad in a navy-blue track pant and a light cotton tee-shirt which was wet with perspiration.I wasn't a happy night at all !! In my left hand I hade a medium sized jute bag and my right index finger had the house key-ring in it. I always make it a point to carry my home keys wherever I go to save my lovely wife of 34 years the trouble of locking up and opening coming down up and again down.


I didn't feel like watching the television and my highly myopic eyes make reading at night a hard task. The jute bag was for fetching some grocery and a pack of cigarettes. As I neared the bend there was Shankar Uncle with his walking stick going towards his home.He was sad and depressed at 85.His children are well off and settled outside the city. He lives with his trusted wife."Where had you been Uncle? and why are you with the walking stick ?" Then I saw that in his left hand he had a small plastic bag of some potatoes. Then Uncle opened his sad sack of sorrows which I listened to with much patience.


"I find it difficult to move out during day because of the hot sun and my doctor has recently diagnosed me with Parkinsons. I am very depressed and wish to leave the world as early as possible.I have many old-age problems. The doctors are squeezing money off me and none of their pills or advice are helping me. The other day I met an old acquaintance who is bent over and he fell face-down many a time. I'm scared that I may also fall down soon."What could I say to comfort him !!!!! I simply put on a pasted smile and wished to say "You'll get well Uncle" but I could NOT since it would be a blatant lie. I simply told him that I was also on the same road and he'd probably go "home" before I do.



Author's Notes/Comments: 

Doesn't Uncle Shankar deserve a better deal ..... It's time for an appointment with Dr Lollypop... A rumour goes that he has not been shaving or changing for six days... I'll send him a SMS or email... but my phone has been confiscated because of the pacemaker [no , not the one you're thinking about]

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a.griffiths57's picture

Great write Bishui and I

Great write Bishui and I enjoyed reading about your country. Sounds as though you have you work cut out for you this time; you are in the midst of a great heatwave there, must be exhausting. Your personal accounts of your part of the world are a real insight into a different culture and an interesting one bishu. We will be having a heatwave here in the UK next week; been a long while sincoe I have been in such high temperatures. Just loved your talk with you Uncle in this prose. Nice write.


 

 

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It was really great to see you comment Madam Anita Thanks

Yes Ma'am.. I belong to this part of the world  so er I write with real backdrop... Sometimes I truly wonder how we people survive the 9 month heat .. Thankfully though it has been raining for the past 10 days or so.... Be well Be Happy Respected Madam Best wishes from Kolkata 29th June'15 


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Growing Old Gracefully

2 things: cigarettes and pacemakers do not go together. Congrats on 34 years with a lovely wife, you are a lucky poet person in Kolkata. 85 is a great age. Sorry about Uncle's diagnoses - I know about paying doctor fee and co-pays. Whew! It is time for me to make an appointment so I can also be fleeced by my health care providers. But knowing is better than not and if a cure or medication can ease symptoms, that works for me.
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I saw a headline: 700 dead in Pakistan due to heat wave. I have no real complaints. I'm alive. ~allets~


 

 

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Yes Respcected Madam LadyA

Thank you so so much... Being alive is the greatest gift and all the things which "?" has given me. I am thankful.... Smile


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