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Seven Bridges

You say my eyes 

never give away my thoughts,

but you can feel my heart 

in my fingertips,

hear the love

within my voice,

and see my soul

at the corner of my lips;

and as I see you watching me,

and I look through your eyes,

that distance disappears.

 
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That's absolutely beautiful!

That's absolutely beautiful! GREAAAT Work!


<3

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Thank you so much! 

Thank you so much! 

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sheer breathtaking

sheer breathtaking brilliance! I am jealous! ;) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you Dear, but I'm still DEEPLY indebted to you! ;-)

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nicely done :)

nicely done :)

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Thank you Sir!

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so close to soul mating here my dear, except the love in voice is missing and the thoughts are screaming from the eyes like trapped children through floor boards..and it hurts more than I can handle...poems to come

 

loved it by the way


Much Love

Ashley

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Exactly! and i can't wait Dear,

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Yes... it is I think called

Yes... it is I think called "knowing one's heart"....love it.

.... you went to that place in yourself to write this and it is so obvious. Absolutely a great thing for us all to do once in a while...but to express it so beautifully takes a poet. 

Thx beavis.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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All I can say is wow and deeply honored! Thank you!

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Wonderful Title!

That's seeing and feelin' a whole bunch "...you can feel my heart in your fingertips..." Ouch! - nice way to say I read you. Hey hey, Beav. ~A~

 

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Thanks Lady A! I thought you might get this ;-)