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I Won't Let You Fade

Let the crocodile tears flow freely baby girl
and I’ll rock you in my arms while you sleep;
I can sing to you about mocking birds
and loving you a bushel and a peck.

I know you hurt and my words won’t help
but let me hold you anyway,
you can use my heart to help yours beat,
just like before you were born.

I can still hear the music in your eyes,
And it’s surrounded by ambition and dreams.
The laughter in your heart has not died
because I saw it there when you smiled

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I'm still working on this and the title....need some feedback

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©18 October 2012 - 2:47pm — battlepink
18 October 2012 - 9:23pm — b4i8islept
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Love it so far

I love it so far Lisa. As far as the title I would only suggest maybe it have lullaby in it.

Roger http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B007TX729I

19 October 2012 - 12:57pm — battlepink
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Thank you Roger....still

Thank you Roger....still having a hard time with the title. I like the idea of having lullaby in the title, trying maybe to use tears also,...Lullaby Tears?..When Lullabies Cry?......thinking thinking thinking.