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A Portrait of Wind (revived)

On a warm spring day
you push the scent of
apple blossoms past my nose
using only a whispers touch

Summer comes and you
almost disappear,
making only a slight appearance
just before the moon rise.

In the cool fall you playfully
tease the vibrant coloured
leaves that ride your murmurs
to a hardened ground.

Winters furry hears your
cries, your Midas like
touch turning life into a
world dipped in crystals.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

tweeking anyone????

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last updated 12 October 2012 - 1:13pm
©11 October 2012 - 8:16pm — battlepink
27 January 2019 - 4:41pm — allets
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Seasonal Poem of Excellence

So many poems written about the seasons but using the wind as the uniting image knits this into uniquness. Enjoyed, read it 3x. :D slc

 

 

17 October 2012 - 3:41am — b4i8islept
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Soothing

This poem is so soothing Lisa :)

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17 October 2012 - 12:54pm — battlepink
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I was peacful when I wrote

I was peacful when I wrote this........felt good.

16 October 2012 - 12:14am — expebonyprincess
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Very nice

Very nice

12 October 2012 - 12:59pm — battlepink
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Thanks guys!!!!

Thanks guys!!!!

12 October 2012 - 1:16pm — Beavis
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beautiful!

Beautiful imagery, language and symmetry. Great write!

11 October 2012 - 10:42pm — SSmoothie
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Gorgeous! This is just

Gorgeous! This is just darling! A wonderful escape from the monstrosities of life! Just what I needed! Beautifully done! HugSS

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