My Sedona

Vortex energy swirls motionlessly;
making a watercolour painting
with the hippie broom skirt

the collected red stones she holds in her hands,
place themselves in random stacks,
while animal spirits brush up
and tickle her calves

A shirtless warrior from a fathom cliff house
watches her standing on the clay,
She reaches for the heavens,
breathing deep the iron scent
that lingers in the still air.

shhhhh;
can you hear her palms tingling,
can you feel the tear she sheds......

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SSmoothie's picture

Man i swear i was there!?

Man i swear i was there!? Lovely imagery liked the iron in the air and spirits rushing calves etc :) what a star!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ashes_theartofburning's picture

It was ..

As if I could feel my feet within the layers of soil.

What a very vivid read..
I wouldn't be reaching towards the heavens though..
Now that shirtless warrior that you speak of is a whole different matter!
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I very much enjoyed this.
You hold the readers attention well.
Brilliant write!


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

battlepink's picture

Thank you.....and by the way,

Thank you.....and by the way, he's is Magnificently hot!

ashes_theartofburning's picture

Let me know..

If he is in need of a battle cry!
I've got my viking helmets!
Pfft!
-.^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

The_Mav's picture

Yes beautiful write! I love

Yes beautiful write! I love the imagery and the scented scenes thanks!


If its possible, no matter what it always starts with a dream! 

Beavis's picture

OMG!!!

Stunningly beautiful and poetic!!! This poem so fully engaged and enchanted me!

battlepink's picture

I friend of mine just got

I friend of mine just got back from Sedona, AZ where she had a “spiritual experience” while hiking. She was so excited and moved; I had to write her something special. She took a photo of a small rock formation that she built during the event. She’s going to frame the picture and the poem together. Should be beautiful, she owns her own art gallery.

I am so glad you're enjoying this.

battlepink's picture

Thank you my

Thank you my friend.......(wink)

Beavis's picture

This just gets more beautiful

This just gets more beautiful each time I read it! Bookmarked! ;-)