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I feel your words upon my skin
your thoughts within my mind
I kill my loneliness with the idea of you
adorned around me, inside me
moving when I move
moaning when I moan
completly lost in a moment as one
dancing the slowest, softest slow dance
like a sunrise to fill the soul
as your words play upon my skin
and I kill my loneliness with your poetic mercy
I feel your words inside me

 

 

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I am not pleased with the ending but when am I evr pleased with anything, and yeah see if you can guess why I piekced that title ?

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last updated 20 May 2013 - 5:55pm
©30 June 2007 - 8:04am — running_with_rabbits
5 July 2007 - 1:05am — Aaron Sienicki (not verified)
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love the poem...but in the 7th line... the word complely...it should be completely

16 January 2008 - 1:01am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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I have seen you do soooo much better then this one, but as far as things go, you have done worse. The last line does not flow with the rest of it, but the beginning three lines are silver if not gold :)

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