why is that I find, I am still inlove with you
after all these years and all that time
when you hold me and you're mine
why is it that I leave, when you want me to stay
after all those words and moments past
when you want me I am home at last
why is that we find this, starnge and vast like sorrow
after all the could have beens and nevers
when time stands still, our bond severs
so why is it that I find you, behind each and every door
after all our momnets, lies, and tears
I find you still after all these years
"after all those words and moments past
when you want me I am home at last"
this is the part that I like the best but i like the way you did the end too, good stuff, even if some of it did not flow
Nicole.J.Burgesss
eh I might say that this is better than Hemmingway... at least it isn't miles and miles long of... NOTHING! It's got a good point to it...