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2003

 

Would you run your hands along my entire body and make your lips follow
Memorising every curve, ever line, every taste
Press against me in the night and hold me so close that I become your sweat
Would you let me love your body until your body is no more
Until it breaks in our passion
Our ecstasy
Can we dance our dance round your pillows in rivers of our dreams
Can we become lovers, and make love so intense that we can't breath

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

''my emotions are twisted like a spider web around your body''
- Anna Metzler

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David Kohut's picture

Dear Ashley
This one has tons of passion in it that's why its so good in my opinion. The poem flows well too, and I must say its personally appealing (hahaha).

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

If you refuse to try to make it happen, then it's something not deserved, oh shit, i sound like i'm preaching, i'm not though, sorry
nikki


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Savannah Tangen's picture

Beautiful.