Look into my mind-see my soul
You will find my goal
Search your pain-search your fear
And when you find I’m that you’ll run for sure
Don’t tell me that you think I am more
You can’t tell me that what I want ain’t more
You know its true
Everything I do- I do for a screw
Look into my heart-you will find
There's nothing there that’s kind
I’ll fuck you if I can-that’s my plan
I will take your heart and smash it nice
Don’t tell me what I feel is more
I can’t help it that’s what I live for
You know its true
Everything I do-I do for a screw
There's no fun-like this fun
And no other-would be more fun
There's no fame-without this game
It’s the truth-its just me
Oh you can’t tell me its not worth playn’ for
I can’t help it I’m always wanting more
Yeah I would fight for it-I’d lie for it
Walk the wire for it-yeah I’d cry for it
Ya know its true
Everything I do-oh I do for a screw
well done
Very thought provoking, and very well written. This is real and saturated to capacity with emotion behind word. Always amazed!
oh man!
oh all the poems you could read you go back and read an old, crapy, parody? :/ I think I was what 16 when I wrote this lol
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Ashley
I think many men born before
I think many men born before the 1990s look at sex the way women look at affection. It is a cognitive distortion on both sides.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I disagree
Interested , and requiring further explanation....any takers?
oj man please pm me more
oj man please pm me more about this thought! it sounds like the starts to a BEAUTIFUL conversation!
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Ashley
I think that everyperson knows at least one person that is like this, and it is a good song but i like your versoin better
nikki
ps:if every person knows t least one person like that and it is not the same person, can you imaging how many pigs we have out there
scary!!!!!
Nicole.J.Burgesss
Mike at one point in time everyone is
the only thing that makes a guy a nice guy and not a mean guy, is the fact that it doesn't happen often with them
if they are always like this
they suck
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Ashley
I glad that I'm not like that. ............am'I
the perenial 'thinking below the waist' song... we all deny it, but sometimes we all do it. good writing. eric
i would put a comma in here "And when you find I’m that you’ll run for sure" and this line would sound better with one to, it would give it more emphisis, to me anyways "I can’t help it that’s what I live for" yeah nice poem though :) love ya always Vicki
Interesting parody :) It fits so well! P.S. Eric, it's a Brian Adams song (that I used to like until I read this j/k)
Excellent! That song was well overplayed.
I can hear some distortion and sustain here and a rock song developing with some pretty heavy backbeat and a driving bass.....with some screaming on key.......you probably meant for it to be folksy to get the point across ......but that is a rock n roll line "EVERYTHING I DO!! I DO FOR A SCREW!!! Ican see Steve Tyler all over this.....thanks....you can tell by my reply that I enjoyed this.....regards....Eric
People don't run out of dreams they just run out of time.
ha ha very funny did u write it for andy or erik? luv nici
i didn't like that!!
It's A Phase
It seems the most important until you get a std, then everything you do you do for a screw with a condom :D - nice poem about facts of living ~allets
:)
:)
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Ashley