My Mask

My mask is in place but can

you see through it?

There are days where you seem

to be the only one who really

sees me under my mask.

I have had it in place for so

long that I don't know if it is

the real me or if it really is my

mask that I am showing the world.

Maybe I can take my mask off to

show you the real me like I have

wanted to but will you hurt me

like everyone else has?

My mask has been my protection

from those who have hurt me.

It shows them I am not affected

by them when in truth I feel as

if I am dying inside.

Can you see all that?

Can you see what my mask hides

from the rest of the world?

I wish you can though I do not

know why that is.

Maybe you make me feel like being

myself is okay and that everything

will be okay in the end.

Maybe you are giving me a strength

I haven't had in a very long time.

I don't know but my mask is slowly

cracking and I am almost ready to

take it off.

Will you help me with it?

Author's Notes/Comments: 

With everything I have gone through, I have always felt like I had to hide my feelings and put on a smile for the world to see.  It always seemed like it was the best thing for me to do.  Not many could tell that I was sad most of the time.  Over time, I got use to pretending.  Now, I don't know if I want to pretend anymore.

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grimfate's picture

Oh yes I like this poem, the mask itself has taken on life for you I totally get that. It's the has my mask become me or have I become the mask image you've totally mastered there with your words. I have two things to say depending. 1 is if this is how you feel truly you must destroy the mask and 2 is if these are just words to tell a story of pain you have totally cast the illusion, there for the mask is not real but still remains to hide the truth. Genius stuff, bravo.


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susiemayee's picture

i have tears in my eyes.. this is really good<3


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