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dying embers

im getting tired of waiting
Time seemed to keep still
I have promises to fulfill
Judges are already whispering
Im losing hope
Im losing faith
Im losing the battle
The burning fire once
Are now dying embers
Will i still hold on
To this tiny glimmer
Unsure of the future
The dying embers can bring

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©25 February 2012 - 9:43am — amirah27
3 March 2012 - 10:24am — SSmoothie
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Ooh I loved this I read it

Ooh I loved this I read it earlier when I didn't have time to comment just had to say this is an exceptional piece! Lovely work!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

6 March 2012 - 1:17am — amirah27
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thanks

thank you for the c0mment Ss. This, c0ming from you, made my day..