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S74rw4rd commented on: Unquiet Dawn by patriciajj 14 hours 46 min ago
As you write your poems, you: As you write your poems, you are working along side the Hubble and Webb outer space telescopes.  But they are mere machines and can neither interpret nor appreciate what they send forth.  You, however, are sentient---one of those consciousnesses that have been chosen for cosmic explication.  
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S74rw4rd commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; The Museum Attendant's Conversation by S74rw4rd 21 hours 15 min ago
Thank you.: Thank you.
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patriciajj commented on: Unquiet Dawn by patriciajj 21 hours 15 min ago
I'm going to take your deeply: I'm going to take your deeply inspiring guidance to heart. Thank you again and again for bringing me back to PostPoems. And myself! God bless. 
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; The Museum Attendant's Conversation by S74rw4rd 21 hours 20 min ago
Thank you for your: Thank you for your extraordinary courtesy in spite of your hardships. Sending prayers and positive thoughts your way. Be well, gifted Poet and bringer of light. 
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S74rw4rd commented on: Unquiet Dawn by patriciajj 1 day 9 hours ago
The poetic edifice that you: The poetic edifice that you have been constructing, poem by poem, over the years is, I believe, incontrovertible proof that one of the primary functions of the poetic vocation is to participate in, and advance, the process of the Cosmos explaining itself to itself.  You not only speak to humanity on earth, you speak to and for star systems, galaxies, nebulae, rogue comets, and meteor showers.  Two to three thousand years ago, Poets created the myths by which stars and constellations have been named.  Now, the responsibility to explicate what has been named  becomes a new Poetic process and vocation, for which you are eminently qualified.  This is why, in my opinion, it is vitally important that every poem you complete takes its rightful place on the internet (hopefully, postpoems).  
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S74rw4rd commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; The Museum Attendant's Conversation by S74rw4rd 1 day 10 hours ago
Any comment from you is not: Any comment from you is not only a privilege, but a validation.  I thank you for visiting this poem, and for explicating it with your usual shrewd and authoritative remarks.  I apologize for the brevity of this response; but at the moment I am facing a small crisis of sorts.  I did not want to appear ungrateful for the comment.
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Savvart commented on: You My Love, Are Poetry by Savvart 1 day 13 hours ago
Thank you so much. This is: Thank you so much. This is actually a poem I wrote in 1981 and it's the first time it has been presented. I have also placed it on my youtube channel. Thx again :)
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S74rw4rd commented on: You My Love, Are Poetry by Savvart 1 day 15 hours ago
I have been reading Poetry: I have been reading Poetry since April of 1973.  And in all that time of reading, I cannot remember encountering a poem that compared the Beloved to Poetry.  The whole poem is excellently orchestrated:  the rhyme scheme, the flow of the sense from line to line, and the delicacy of the emotion conveyed---all of it is choreographed, or perfectly balanced like the gears and escapement of a fine clock before the digitial age.  I applaud your accomplishment here.
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patriciajj commented on: Unquiet Dawn by patriciajj 1 day 15 hours ago
You were spot on in your: You were spot on in your assessment of my core message, and I couldn't feel more gratified that you not only used your mental laser-pointer to illuminate it, but presented it with overwhelming magnificence. A poet couldn't ask for more, but there was more . . .   After grasping my burning intention for many of my expressions, you defined my overall theme of unity as a "Cosmology". Just where, starbound Poet, do I begin to thank you for seeing and appreciating that?   I'm also thrilled by your very kind reassurance that my processes work. That means more than you can imagine and more than I could, in one lifetime, thank you for.   Peace and Light.   
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Savvart commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 1 day 18 hours ago
Much appreciation for your: Much appreciation for your kind words :)
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osiriss- commented on: Tarot card by osiriss- 2 days 3 hours ago
I love your comment in so: I love your comment in so many ways
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S74rw4rd commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 2 days 12 hours ago
The power of this poem: The power of this poem functions on two levels:  the beauty of its language, and the content that it presents to the reader.  This is excellent work.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Unquiet Dawn by patriciajj 2 days 14 hours ago
I woke in the middle of the: I woke in the middle of the night to find that this poem has posted; and as I have said for a couple of years now, a poem posted by Patricia is an event.  This poem embodies that excitement.  The supple slenderness of her brief lines reveals a profound depth of meaning that fully blossoms toward the conclusion of the poem. Her poems are, primarily, poems of process.  They are choreographies of those processes which, in her Poetry, normally take place on a cosmic scale or stage.  If she writes about a flower blooming in some meadow, you can assume that there is also, in some part of the galaxy, a star emerging from a nebula and igniting unto light and warmth.  Her metaphors and similes are very dramatic, and the crows like priests that do not know what vows are, is downright comical.  But whatever effect is rendered by her poetic devices, they are all carefully and skillfully directed to the same end:  to describe the connectedness of all aspects of existing in a community of all things that exist.  The blooming flower in a meadow on earth shares a fellowship with the newly emerged and glowing star.  Whiile this is Poetry, and no one can dispute that fact, it is also a fully functional Cosmology (but without all the tedious mathematical equations; one need not have studied Calculus to understand her Poetry). Like Wallace Stevens' Poetry, Patricia's has a deliberate center of gravity which is usually deep within the poem, and in this particular poem it is in the final eight lines.  Here she shows us the connectedness or community of all existence:  everything has to do with everything everywhere.  This is a cosmologically credal statement---as self-evident as any of Euclid's axioms, but even more essential.  The connectedness of all things is axiomatic because all things were created by God, the name of Whom was revealed to Apostle John (chosen appropriately from among them all) as Love.  And Love has given the task of explication to certain Poets . . . not every Poet, but only a chosen few, among whom is Patriciajj.
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patriciajj commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 2 days 14 hours ago
That's so sumptuously: That's so sumptuously beautiful and spontaneous! You certainly have an innate gift. Thank you kindly for honoring me with it. Keep penning, splendid Poet. 
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Savvart commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 2 days 16 hours ago
Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your kind words, and for visiting my YouTube channel, they are so appreciated. Not getting many views on YouTube sadly. Here is my poem to you, that has sprung from your beautiful compliment.   In whispered tones so softly sent, A compliment as heavens’ scent, Where words, like dew on morning's bloom, Illuminate the subtlest gloom.   O blesséd speech that thus imparts A summer's warmth to winter hearts! Thy gracious air, with charm replete, Makes every echoed pulse so sweet... 
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