Little Paper Package

 Early in the morning or late at night

 It don't matter when, it's just best at the height

Of your exhaustion, depression, your stress

It's a time for your thoughts, a time for your rest

Just walk a block away to take up time

The depth within the steps; thoughts making life prime

Like sitting on a mountain top seeing

Clouds of memories float by feeling so freeing

Just inhale good vibes from your surroundings

Exhale grief, sorrow, and the awful mountings

Of this world's worries; rid of all hurries

Watch the smoke billow out and carry throughout

Then evaporates, just like your troubles

The core of your strength and sense doubles

That little paper package converts hardships to little vapor baggage

It hits you easy like a plane takes flight;

There is pressure of force but once it is released into the air it's as smooth as a kite

In with the good, out with the bad

Hit after hit this world is less sad

And the less and less I get mad

Until the fulfillment I have had

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This piece starts a transition from ten to eleven meters, but ends in free style because I believe it reflects how smoking is. After a stressful, long day or a hardship it is perfect to smoke but first it takes a procedure to set up, but once you are smoking, it is freeing and structure and worries don't matter anymore. It's just kind of something I did for fun. If I was a good singer I might turn it into a song haha. Let me know what you think! Tell me if the metaphors stand out and it is pleasing to the ear to read aloud! Comments and criticism is appreciated. Laughing

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