less than amazing is better

focus is the problem with society

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I just wanted to produce something that I have been learning more and more with every trial that comes my way. I don't think this poem is very good, or even written with enough care to it. Sorry! I hope this message I'm trying to send is well-received. Mind commenting if you get it or not? I don't care what you have to say as long as I get feedback. :D