English haiku test piece

For The One Who Cared

 

 

 

 

 

 

For The One Who Cared

 

 

Thank you for Lawrence.

Thank you, Basho, as well—

and all those poets!








Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited/reupdated on 07.26.2020:  I've corrected the misspelled "not" & "if" (supposed to be "note" "of" ... it) in this Author's Notes/Comments.


Reedited on 06.10.2020:  I have noticed an incorrectly input hashtag term "correlative objective", which was actually "objective correlative".  This error was found in two poem comments that I did (& had just been corrected now).  "Objective correlative"  was what I had really meant to put in the hashtag/comment section.  The two words comprising the term/phrase possibly got switched over for some unknown reason while reediting it during the last.  I've also committed some other huge errors, recently discovered, in regards to re-editing in one instance where a huge part of the Author's Notes/Comments got deleted, with just the remainder of it showing when discovered as of late (also for an unknown reason, but possibly for hitting some buttons mistakenly within the interface with such a small screen that which I am using).  This would be emended once I get to it so to specifically take note of it (in this respective poem's Author's Notes/Comments section).  Thank you for reading on.




Reedited on 01.23.2020:


I noticed another minor spacing error that I reedited.  The following is the spacing error:  "when I  exampled"  (then supplanted for "when I exampled")



Unedited, retained section (for comparison):


{3.)  Lastly, I have also noticed that there must be something wrong in this part of the sentence (if the English Grammar rules are to be applied):  "...mimesis, diegesis.' just for my reference)".


I have, therefore, reedited that part, after all, and supplanted that erroneous section of the text for "...mimesis, diegesis', just for my reference)"; the double quotation mark, within the quoted section/part" is substituted for a single quotation mark when I  exampled this rework of the sentence.}






Reedited on 01.05.2020:


I have simply supplanted "Reupdated on 01.02.2020 (for minor resizing of uneven text/font  sizes)."  for "Reupdated on 01.02.2020 (for minor resizing of uneven text/font sizes)."  A minor spacing error.



Reupdated on 01.02.2020 (for minor resizing of uneven text/font sizes).



Reupdated on 01.01.2020:



I have noticed a mistyped word, or, quite simply, a typographical error in the previous reedition (dated 12.25.2019).  The following was the unedited version containing the error in number three, in the second paragraph



Retained, unedited version (where the error was found, in number three):

 

 

3.)  Lastly, I have also noticed that there must be something wrong in this part of the sentence (if the English Grammar rules are to be applied):  "...mimesis, diegesis.' just for my reference)".


I have, therefore, reedited that part, after all, and supplanted that erroneous section of the text for "...mimesis, diegesis', just for my reference)"; the double quotation mark, within the quoted section/part" is substituted for a single quotation mark when I exampled this rework of the sentence.






Reupdated on 12.25.2019:



1.)  I went over this Author's Notes/Comments & was able to see some errors that were committed during the last reedition (quite possibly due to being in a hurry most of the time, or whenever I mostly have done it hastily or while on the go).  


The previous unedited version (see below) contains the error which was corrected by identifying or specifying the two items which were emended contrastingly.  This shows that "I can't help", later reedited to "could not help", was not precisely exampled.  What I should have typed in to correctly give an example was "can't help" (without the I) if I was to use comparisons.


2.)  Then I also have noticed another mistake, possibly for hurrying up while doing editing in the previous reeditions, the doubled "2.)" in "2.) 2.)  I also have added unto...".  Therefore I have to remove the second one.  Please refer to the recopied unedited version below:


(Unedited, retained version: "2.) 2.)  I also have added unto he hashtags the following terms/words/phrases:  correlative objective, mimesis and diegesis, mimesis, diegesis", just for my reference)


3.)  Lastly, I have also noticed that there must be something wrong in this part of the sentence (if the English Grammar rules are to be applied):  "...mimesis, diegesis.' just for my reference)".


I have, therefore, reedited that part, after all, and supplanted that erroneous section of the text for "...mimesis, diegesis', just for my reference)"; the double quotation mark, within the quoted section/part is substituted for a single quotation mark when I  exampled this rework of the sentence.




 


Previous Version of Last Reedition:  


1.)  I have emended the sentence structure below (please kindly refer to the "Previous Unedited Version") by reediting "I can't help" by supplanting it for "could not help".






Reupdated on 12.23.2019:  


1.)  I have emended the sentence structure below (please kindly refer to the "Previous Unedited Version") by reediting "I can't help" by supplanting it for "could not help".


2.)  I also have added unto the hashtags the following terms/words/phrases:  correlative objective, mimesis and diegesis, mimesis, diegesis.


3.) I also have reedited the mistyped/misspelled "he [hashtags]" by supplanting it for "the hashtags".


4.)  I could not help but reedit the format of the Author's Notes/Comments, as well, to enumerate the reeditions because it is also a numbered list.


 

(Unedited, retained version: "2.) I also have added unto he hashtags the following terms/words/phrases:  correlative objective, mimesis and diegesis, mimesis, diegesis", just for my reference)


 

 

Reedited Version:  


I have noticed the missing comma when I double-checked my haiku verse, which I usually compose on the fly, and I could not help noticing the second line that read, "Thank you Basho, as well—".  I simply took the liberty to change that so I simply have supplanted that for "Thank you, Basho, as well—."  Thank you for reading on.






Previous Unedited Version:

 

Reedited on 12.22.2019:

 

I have noticed the missing comma when I double-checked my haiku verse, which I usually compose on the fly, and I can't help noticing the second line that read, "Thank you Basho, as well—".  I simply took the liberty to change that so I simply have supplanted that for "Thank you, Basho, as well—."  Thank you for reading on.

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