Sonnets

on "WHEN YOU ARE OLD", of W.B. YEATS

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W.B. gave me the first 12 lines for my sonnet (why he didn't do one, I know not), but in order to not directly copy him, I reversed the order of his lines, still trying to feel his meaning, but not mentioning "Old Age"!! (shudder!). I wanted to stress the agelessness of Truth & Love. The whole concept was prompted by a response, by K. Tinsley, to a "Gimme 10" challenge; hers reminded me MUCH of this Yeats piece.  And-on-and-on-and-on.... How did I do??

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TREASURE / TRESOR

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K., sometimes the "challenge" of many words is better than merely the "10".
(Response to "My Treasure", by K. A. Tinsley. Six lines + six lines, and extended slightly (just like me).

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FRIENDSHIP'S ONLY SORROW IS IN PARTING

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From lines 10, 11, & 12, those of you who know of "The Challenge" are hereby challenged!!  These are quotes from old love-letters I found.

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BEGETTER FAIRER

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Whose Muse? I think this "Quatrain / quatrain / couplet / couplet / couplet"  is Specerian-form;  any correctors??

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99a sonnet : Love Which Has No Need Of Conscience

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From a kernel of Edna St Vincent Millay, Sonnet XVIII.

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Wonderment

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my first sonnet

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THE LIGHT IS ON

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2002 Poetry
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THE BEST

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Composed on March 29, 2002...For who else but my Daphne!

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On the Poetic Couch Again

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A decent Sonnet I think.

Just a reflection on those, like myself, for whom writing can be cathartic.

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