Your use of entrancing,: Your use of entrancing, mood-altering atmosphere injects so much power into this romantic escape. The clash of emotions in "the kiss of day to night" when "both joy and sadness paint the sky in their brief/ embrace" was particularly effective.
What also makes this work so well is the beguiling images and sense of place that speak for the ecstasy, the union, of the lovers and all else is left to the imagination. What is not said is glorious, open-ended . . . pure magic.
Encore!
Thank you for sharing that: Thank you for sharing that immortal quote by a monumental artist. You expressed the hypnotic power the night sky with captivating simplicity and beauty. After reading this, I feel inspired.
I'm truly distressed to hear: I'm truly distressed to hear this, and yes, life often feels like one long cosmic farce, but I'm glad you're still here and still penning moving and imaginative art. Sending positive thoughts and best wishes your way.
I'm deeply moved by your: I'm deeply moved by your brave, authentic and shattering walk through the dark night that falls upon many of us. I felt it profoundly in every line, but the title suggests there is path, only temporarily hidden, to freedom. A lucid and devastating outpouring.
A sublimely simple, eternal: A sublimely simple, eternal cure for inner thirst, for what our true self longs for. With elegance and grace, you set our feet upon higher ground. A sparkling gem.
Praying you will get through..: Praying you will get through this ordeal and return to educating and enlightening us with your poetry. Keep the faith, my friend.
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