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SSmoothie commented on: A Blustery Day in the Bedroom by Spinoza 1 week 3 days ago
How good! I totally ignored: How good! I totally ignored my phone ringing to read this and well I love the ending as much as the faux par. Nicely written held the intimacy and realism well, I felt myself think I've been there before, not the same issue but the same rhythmic dance of words snaking through to get to the truth only to find its actually an eel. Just Good work. Great even! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: The Moment by Wordman 1 week 3 days ago
Just gorgeous! Expertly: Just gorgeous! Expertly done  I have so many day_night lovers poems i can day hand on my heart this is simply gorgeous and affecting from start to finish.  Wonderfully wrought an ageless theme in a flawless frame. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Sonnet On The Orthodox Faith, And My Poor Practice Of It by S74rw4rd 1 week 3 days ago
Yes beautiful,  Prayer and: Yes beautiful,  Prayer and fasting are the highest form of worship, quiet humble, meaningful and intimate.  I concur 
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SSmoothie commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Sonnet On The Orthodox Faith, And My Poor Practice Of It by S74rw4rd 1 week 3 days ago
There has never been an: There has never been an obligation 9f fasting and attending church Orthodoxy knows that Israel.is us together with the most high in our hearts. Not the church though it exists because of , it waits patently for the prodigal sons to return.  Even i struggle the 40days of lent with no oil animal products all week, but each year I try to do something better. The relationship matters the scripture fosters this, the theology explains this and the condition of man and the journey to the supernatural. There are strict rules but also grace, and the ill and infirm have always been exempt from fasting so any fasting is such a joy. We are not monks, we are the sinners living in a world of sin trying to set ourselves apart useless with out salvation, repentance and compassion. I've sworn these days and only stopped eating meat. Each is in their own homeostatis through spiritual attacks, remorse is of course a very good sign. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 1 week 3 days ago
Yes what if all is well? It: Yes what if all is well? It is always well, What a boring way  If heaven is nothing but peace all day No touch  Taste,  Smell, Only foresight  No free will,  How boring if all was well  How great that such a journey begins  Where the dark is the backdrop of light  Constrasting and playing  With blind luck  Seeing strengths we never knew we had  Things we never dreamed  Because we always knew What a gift a is the veil  What a thrill is exposition  Something different to what you knew  The joy of surprise  A truly valuable thing  In the eye of the beholder  Who could not with out life Have beholden.    Such an amazing concept and look at trials and renewal tge art of tempering...    How well you write,  Alwaye a pleasure in every case.   Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Moonset at Winter's End by patriciajj 1 week 3 days ago
Its been too long  So much: Its been too long  So much going on Sorry dear,  Now let's enjoy your take  Life and fear    So many great lines and ideas    Duality and insight    I loved this: "searches the  nonnegotiable  emptiness—"    Just wow.    The wolf has nothing on you but it leads the way to the hunting grounds...   For clues to you   Who you are  Begins and ends  Where the old you ends, and new you begins...    A challenging and inspiring journey...    Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Unfinished Work by osiriss- 1 week 3 days ago
I love the ending drawing in: I love the ending drawing in the reader by addressing them directly leaving them wonder and emphasise the unfinished work. Alot of gobledy goop with some real gems planted inside - insights. Powerful ones. Enjoyed the experience of this poem. I hate AI.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; A Poem For, And To, The Poet Romanos The Melodist by S74rw4rd 1 week 3 days ago
I am overwhelmed and humbled: I am overwhelmed and humbled by your comments' words.  Your explication of the connection between me and Romanos reminds me also to cherish and cultivate the connection I have to my contemporary Poets, especially yourself. Western Christianity has never attempted to explain why the Starwatchers traveled to Bethlehem.  But that reason has been known in Orthodoxy since Romanos published his Nativity Poem, and now I have appropriated it. Believe forgive me for the brevity of this comment.  The therapy and long walk I had today has left me rather exhausted.  I mean no disrespect.  
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S74rw4rd commented on: Soft and Final Landing by patriciajj 1 week 3 days ago
There are always going to: There are always going to readers who either scorn, misunderstand, or condemn your poems.  And keep in mind that even Jesus was accused of being in league with the devil during His ministry.  I guess that slaphappy stupidity comes with the territory. And that territory, please remember, is to help explain the Cosmos to itself.  No single Poet can do the complete job; all of us who are called to that vocation have to do the part assigned to us.  Remember how Adam, in Eden, was called to name the animals.  That task being finished, we are called, as his sons and daughters, to name and explicate the Cosmos and its many parts:  and it is everything from two lovers holding hands to two stars arising from the sa,e nebula and orbiting each other.  That can be explicated scientifically, but it also quietly requires---even demands---Poetry to also describe this mechanism.  This is the vocation to which you have been called, and until your final poem is written, you will have work to do.  
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Mylo commented on: Two Doors by Mylo 1 week 3 days ago
Thank you for your kind critique.: .
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; A Poem For, And To, The Poet Romanos The Melodist by S74rw4rd 1 week 4 days ago
There is a fascinating: There is a fascinating connection, centuries apart, but still viable, between you and Saint Romanos The Melodist, Great Poet and your brother in the Orthodox Faith. Both of you, gifted with the same melodious eloquence, were intrigued and stricken by the same prediction by an unlikely prophet and its awe-inspiring fulfillment.   In case you are questioning my assertion that you share the same stately, reverent style of Saint Romanos, I felt compelled to read the work you referenced in the notes. Usually when you write a tribute or a poem after another poet, I will do my homework so I can better appreciate your perspective and emotions.   As I read the gorgeous Orthodox homily, I noticed a similarity in intonation, devoutness and emotive power to the plethora of poems I've had the pleasure of reading here, on your page, these past years. I've been reading poetry for at least as long as you have, so I believe I have some credibility on this subject.    Now the last line: that conclusion is like the morning sun that followed the Star. It is a gale of angelic trumpets, a flourish of song, an opening to God. No, I'm not overstating because here is the path through the brambles that would snare us all around on our way to forever. Not by sight, however dazzling, but by faith, we must be led.   So much to unpack in this highly significant tribute and I treasured every moment of it.    
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arqios commented on: Two Doors by Mylo 1 week 4 days ago
Really felt that Mylo! Liked: Really felt that Mylo! Liked the dynamic and the interconnection. 
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Teytonon commented on: I think I remember something by Morningglory 1 week 5 days ago
Why haven’t you written..: Why haven't you written anything new in a long time? Are you retired now?
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J-C4113d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Sonnet On The Orthodox Faith, And My Poor Practice Of It by S74rw4rd 1 week 5 days ago
Thank you so much, so very,: Thank you so much, so very, very much, for those very encouraging words.  The poem arose from an hour of despondancy (and perhaps a bit of self-pity, too), but I really, really appreciate what you have written about it.
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J-C4113d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; A Poem To The EARLY CHRISTIANS by S74rw4rd 1 week 5 days ago
Thank you for commenting. : Thank you for commenting.  The Early Christians are very important to me; I think that is why I incline to Orthodox Christianity, because it feels more connected to them than the Western version.
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