@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Aetia, Jay A---

Obviously no poem of mine can adequately describe you.

So I will be content to present my observations:  the

way that profusion of hair frames your face; the

muscularity of your now shirtless torso---distinct, but not

distorted in the manner of professional body

builders or other advertisers of chemical or mechanical

services.  The way your jeans fit you should also be

noted---and, now that your shoes are absent, how the

cuffs kind of pool around your grass-stained feet.  In the

presence of your beauty, I am ugly; in the

presence of your achievements, I am unaccomplished; in the

presence of your answers, I have no further questions; in the

presence of your love, I discover that I am loved.  I crave the

fragrance and flavor of your mouth, your bared skin, and,

ultimately, the sweetness you eagerly release.  No poem of

mine can adequately describe you; but this poem of

mine should not fail to make the effort to do so.


Starward

[*/+/^]

Author's Notes/Comments: 

To Jay A---:  between December, 1973 and May, 1974, the words of this poem should have been offered to you.  But that time and place was not conducive, and so the words were silenced and repressed.  But not forgotten; and, now, disclosed, discloseted.

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For me this poem creates

the urge to weep, the urge to sing. Beautiful.

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Thank you very much for your

Thank you very much for your comment and for visiting the poem.  Those urges to weep and to sing are probably universal in that kind of a relationship, I think.  


Starward