Circa 1976: Two Boys Seated At A Table In The College Library's Basement, In Mid-September

How can I sort these

notes while your shirt hangs open;

and your bare feet (not

quite concealed beneath your jeans'

bell-bottoms) caress my own?

 

Kyakuchuu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

With variation of certain details, I saw this scene often presented by many couples in the library during my four years of college, in 1976-1980.

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C.Locke's picture

I really like this. Your

I really like this. Your wording is deliberate and it creates a playful tone that is simultaneously innocent and not innocent. 


C.Locke

Starward's picture

Thank you very much.

Thank you very much.


Starward

patriciajj's picture

A subtle and playful tension

A subtle and playful tension smolders in this little gem. Very relatable and fun. 

Starward's picture

Thank you.  This one was fun

Thank you.  This one was fun to write, and fun to remember from forty-four years ago.  Thanks for commenting on it!


Starward