ReConfigured: Close Observations

As she nears her peak,

her upper teeth gently nip

her lower lip; or her

tongue's tip moistens both lips:  these
signs are helpfully candid.

 

Kyakuchuu

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patriciajj's picture

Brilliantly captured moment.

Brilliantly captured moment. You craft these steamy snapshots with precision, ingenious detail and power. Wonderful! 

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Thank you for this.  Your two

Thank you for this.  Your two comments have really started my morning off good, after a fairly rotten day yesterday.  And thanks for understanding what I am trying to do in this poem, and in the whole series.  I want to leave a record of my fulsome Muse, and how I perceive her.


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