ReConfigured: Her Exercise Pole

Clad only in a

long tee-shirt and gray, thigh-high

socks, she dances at

that exercise pole---her curves

exquisite in their beauty;


not inhibited,

she revels in my private

delectation as

her feet glide in an orbit---

toes', heels', and arches' action


like the rotations

and revolutions that turn

planets around stars;

stars around galaxies; the

whole motion of the cosmos.



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I Use

This technique to describe characters in my novels - actions as a verb-yes!



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Thank you very much for

Thank you very much for telling me!