That Kiss

I still remember that kiss you  gave me 

atop a windy cliff all those years ago 

I had seen its design in your eyes as they ssoftened

and held fast to thier desired destination 

and as I looked up,

neither wanting or not wanting,

afraid of what would come nnext

as you leaned closer, I felt the headiness of your warmth

your arm around my waist

and thought no more of leaving,

rather just collapsing into your design of our duality and merging.

it was a moment lost in time and the beauty of it still wraps my heart

even on the coldest days I feel as if it were today I remember it this way;

 

warm lips nudging,  melting slowly sweetly, tiny rebounding so softly, drawing ever so gently 

such delicate and soft waves pressing love into my lips 

the slightest breath just enough to keep the exquisite reverberating pressures locked intensely passionate yet flighty and light as not to chase the flutters in my heart away 

the sweet mellow taste melding, collapsing us both into eachothers new beautiful timeless realities...

 

~second draft~ 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Remembered while viewing dovelys candle light romance and vid. Rename from the kiss to that kiss in honor of ROC ;) mwah! 

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INKSTAIN's picture

Tenderness and beauty! 

Tenderness and beauty! 

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Thanks ink! Hugss 

Thanks ink! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

cevance's picture

Absolutely divine! It almost

Absolutely divine! It almost makes me want to sample this thing called love.

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By all means jump in! Getting

By all means jump in! Getting out can be tough but I'd've never regretted it! ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Now that's a kiss....

Now that's a kiss.... explicitly and so illusive, elusive and allusive all at once !!! yes!!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69nOZkmfWxk

............~peace~!!


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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One of my all time favourites

One of my all time favourites thanks nightlight :) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

RoC's picture

Is it wrong

That I feel envious?
Both beautiful and tempting.
I bow to you milady :)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

SSmoothie's picture

And your favourite kiss will

And your favourite kiss will come or has come, when you are everything in that moment it was unexpectedly beautiful and I wish the same for you, I bow to your romantic and wonderful nature only a fool could resist the deep beauty in your romantic  soul ;) hugss it was a very long time ago, somewhat different to the lizard who tried to kiss me in jr high! ;) lol... A kiss is something that can easily go wrong if we over think it! He he he he they were no doubt trying to impress me with thier take on a worldy techniquno probably gained from ssme soft porn! Lol! Lmao brings up so many just wrong moments! Loving it!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

RoC's picture

Are you certain...

That I'm envious of the kiss, and not of the one fortunate to be kissing?
I learned how to kiss the old fashioned way...."watching" scary movies :p


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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PSML,! BAHAHAHAHA

PSML,! BAHAHAHAHA BAHAHAHAHA 

love you ROC you're the best! MWAH!!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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I try

:)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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Hard to really find the right

Hard to really find the right words for that buttery escapade... I'll do it justice till it kills me... Tfroendship that reason I will keep it in draft till then. Ps Roc I remanded it after our convo mwah! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

RoC's picture

Were it to

Press the sweet savor of your lips
Gently caressing this succulent kiss
To capture the flutter and share the bliss
As hearts beat in the utter passion of it


May the butterfly continue to flutter by ;)


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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Yummy! ;) 

Yummy! ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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And, my rebuttal

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roc/poem/964269
This Kiss :D


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

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^^^^^^An incredible must

^^^^^^

An incredible must read by RoC everybody! Click the link above! :* 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am