Past the moon lit sky

Still straining to see past the moonlit sky

seaching for love beyond the stars up above

i ask myself will I ever find the right guy

who is everything I have been dreaming of

 

yes I search through the stardust in space

through the particles of comet trails

the devil has an evil grin on its face

and snickers at me and points to his tail

 

I ask the mighty wind "whats the evil sign"

It whispers " look no further than the devils tail"

So I gaze at the devils ugly behind

Hoping to find the answer hoping not to fail

 

This is sheer madness looking at the end

the tail like a serpent ready to inflict pain

So I turn away trying to comprehend

when suddenly I realize there in nothing to gain

 

just like my fruitless search for love

Through all the particles of moon dust beams

through the countless wishes and hopes from above

the moon lit sky can not bring me my dreams



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I don't really know WHY I like your vision Respected RB !!!

I don't really know WHY I like your vision Respected RB !!!

 

The drizzle went on unabated till late at night

Then the clouds cleared and the silver moon

Washed clean by the fragrant rain appeared

The moon was smiling a silver smile glittering

Shiny as ever more so after the long drizzle

Wonderful stageplay in the night sky with stars

Twinkling and winking at the sleeping forms

Sheets drawn curtains drawn the scene'll end

What force directs the night  can't comprehend

Few minutes later moon hides its message send ............. Respected RB please make this a bit better.I'm particularly unhappy of last two lines Frown


©bishu 

 

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The drizzle went on unabated

The drizzle went on unabated till late at night

Then the clouds cleared and the silver moon

Washed clean by the fragrant rain appeared

Smiling a silver smile, glittering she swooned

Shiny as ever more so after the long drizzle so near

 

Wonderful stageplay in the night sky with stars

Twinkling and winking at the sleeping forms

Sheets drawn curtains drawn the scene'll end so far

 What force directs the night sky to be born?

 

As  the moon hid its message the unbated drizzle fell

Smling down at the world its twinkling, froze hell   

 

 

LOL

 

 

Nicely wriiten

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My dear Respected Friend-in-words .. Lovely ,proper ending

My dear Respected Friend-in-words RB.. Lovely ,proper ending.If you permit me may I post this as a poem?? Or will you as RB?? Option is yours.


©bishu 

 

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It's all your bishu,  its a

It's all your bishu,  its a wonderful poem!  Thank you for asking!

allets's picture

Fabulous Cooperative Effort

It is an impressive ending RB. I agree, it is wonderful - Just Bein' Stella