Can you hear me ? 


Can you hear me whisper out your name at night maybe you can hear me when my heart cries out for help.


Can you hear me or maybe you can not but if you do. Hear my heart while it beats slowly wondering where you are wondering where to find you.


So much wondering so much thinking but why?


I just wonder when you hear me when I whisper your name can you hear me when I scream out to the whole world I love you the same.


Just listen to what I say you are beautiful in every way even if you think you are not you are a person who will never be replaced.


I wish you could hear me and everything I say can you hear me when I say I am sorry.


No you can not the only way you will hear me is if I scream out your name.


I wish you could hear the pain coming from my soul the pain that is hard to get rid of and that will always be the same.








Why can you hear the creams of my heart that cries for help yes for help not for you anymore because it hurts that you said you love someone else you broke me and tore me in to small pieces.


I could not believe my eyes my heart stopped for a second and I asked my self.




Why hurt me in a way that only god could understand how I feel ?




Can you hear me the cries of a man that is broken a man that if he could of given you the world he would of a man who gave you his heart as well as his soul never knowing what lied ahead.




Now you may but it's to late I cried out your name day by day waiting for your arrival but u never showed you never made a appearance in my life.


Now you hear me wen its to late.




Sorry but I can not hear you and now my life is over I am just a old book.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Some times love can hurt you in a way that only god and yourself may understand sometimes you try to talk to someone but they do not understand the only thing you can do is let it be let go and let it all in the hands of god and if at the end of the day it will always be for the best but for some people you just a old book added to the collection that is what hurts more then the good bye knowing they saw you like all of the other people they had in the past I hope everyone enjoyed this poem and may god bless your relationship always and for ever 

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nightlight1220's picture

Miguelito, you have done it

Miguelito, you have done it again. You have an amazing gift, talent of rare virtue, that allows you to so succinctly, with an quality of angelic clarity, to express in words exact feelings that arise in specific situations for many people. What makes your writing so different from others is that you not only express the feeling, you expose the underlying truths in a subtle but clearly visible way. 


There is a quality of honesty that cannot be denied...."up-in-one's-face" with the rawness of not only stark emotion, but the tender side of true love.


People leave us. Sometimes it can be extremely painful when we have to face that we loved them in an attempt to "get" love back...because no one can possess love. It is a difficult reality of love that we, society, are not taught loud enough, but in all honesty, we should be. We have made a grave mistake in not doing so. People leave for all different reasons. Sometimes their reasons are far beyond what we have never had to be faced with. Sometimes they leave for death...the body can become ill. Other times, people can be faced with a personal life mission, and other times they may actually be fighting for their own life or the redemption of their very soul...but have no means to express it to us. It can be devastating for the person who loves with expectation of being loved back.


I love your writes. If you were my son I would tell you to share your work in a very broad sense and touch all you can with it, because the world needs to hear your heart. It beats so loudly.


The reward of the loving.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


miguelito7911's picture

Thank you.

I really do have to thank you for your words they inspire me more then u can possibly imagine your words touch my soul and heart and inspire me to write more an more these words you have just said to me brought tears to my eyes and brought me Goosebumps all over my body thank you for your kind words I will keep writing to inspire people also so they can see they are not alone and that some people do feel the pain they feel thank you again from the bottom of my heart 

nightlight1220's picture

Thank YOU, Miguelito. Stay

Thank YOU, Miguelito. Stay humble as you are. It is such a large part of your gift. As for how your words affect me, I would have to say..."they remind me that we never have to search for love because we ARE love, and when we share of ourselves to another, we are loving in the most powerful way we can". 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


miguelito7911's picture

Thank you

I will always be the same and you are right about all of the above we are love u put together 2 people that love each other and you get something so powerful thank you for your words of wisdom