All alone

Rain, flowing down the drain,

I am still in pain.

Rain, falling everywhere,

but you aren’t there…

and it’s so cold

and I’ve got no one to hold.

Tears are falling here,

All I want is for you to reappear,

but it’s all a dream, just a dream.



I’m still all alone.



Drops of some uneven tone,

make me feel frozen to the bone.

Laughter, something of the past,

tears, are they gone last?

Things aren’t clear anymore,

and I don’t know what I’m living for.

Joy, somewhere lost in my mind,

so hard for me to find,

but it’s all a dream, just a dream.



I’m still all alone.



I close my eyes, as I walk away,

I’ve got too much pride to beg you to stay.

So I would rather be alone….



…still, all alone.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this for someone I had very strong feelings for but who, against all odds, I did not fight for...sometimes we let our pride get in the way of making that one final step or sacrifice for love and we would rather lose it all...than just to come forward and to say: "Ok, here I am and I'm willing to give it all up and forget all the sad/bad moments, just to be with you again" but love's not that easy...

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Adam Adada's picture

:-) i like this one, the overall feeling in it is easy to feel -- the line

"I’m still all alone.

Drops, of some uneven tone,
make me feel frozen to the bone."

that right there paints a vivid picture in my mind. i commend you
xx
-Adam