It doesn't matter what you do

It doesn't matter what you do

Some people are going to hate or disregard you

They'll nitpick you to find a reason

No matter how daunting the obstacle 

look every external challenge in the eye thank it for it's best attempt, say this

If you thought you were going to bury me that's hysterical

if I didn't mention this, I'd be amiss 

You should be the only thing you believe in Life will be very challenging

people are going to lie to you, 

say nice things they don't actually believe themselves

political correctness is the new religion 

brainwashed zombies believe in

Society is everyone's enemy 

daily examine those around you

Words should be followed by actions

To support those words legitimacy 

I'm sensitive to energy 

you don't have to say a word or sound 

Even without speaking to me 

It'll take me minutes to understand

If you're someone I want around

Because my life was full of different experiences 

from most people in the blood tree 

I'm thankful for them, for I think differently

I write these bitch sessions I call my poetry

Trying to see if I connect with people emotionally

When it's highly unlikely they'll ever met me

you can still understand me deeply

Please never forget this cold fact

It doesn't matter what you do

Some people are going to hate or disregard you

 

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Thank you

Thank you for your perfect suggestion. I didn't want to say 100% of people will hate you but I didn't realize I was accidentally imply that


Positively affecting others is the best way to be infectus 

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The center of gravity of this

The center of gravity of this poem is in the final two lines.   But might the assertion be more logical by modifying the last line with the phrase "some people."  Because some, not all, will hate and disregard; but not all, thankfully not all.


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