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Our eyes, intertwined on the same goal
Our minds connecting and sync in ways we'd never known
Our hearts beating to the pattern of the same path of creation
Our thoughts vivrant, passionate, imagery.

          Imagery of what it's like, what it was like, what it could and will be like for us when there's no one to tell it's not right, no one to say that it's not fair.

          Goals of peace manifestation through our souls to the world seeming so cold, while only we know that it's nothing but a mask of dimension. A paradigm of enslavement to seven deadly sins and a impetuous free will standard of living.

My elaboration of your divine imagined destinations of africa and paris to rome antarctica and back. Hand in hand, eye to eye, facing the world with open arms and a strong heart.

Do your remember the time? When we fell in love? Do you remember those conversations, depth vocalized?

Do you remember the time? When we fell in love? Do you remember when I held you against me. Do you remember caring for me when i wasn't up to par because of something i chose to drink? The late night drives home and the sweet sensualk kisses before i watched you walk to your door knowing I couldn't hold on to the moment because the moment would be gone, and I would have nothing because i held on to something that could dinsinegrate?

Do you remember... my lips against your lips? Whispers of dreams of us uplifted to one another? do you remember these things i can elaborate to you? My imagination still roams there somedays... in that feild where we walked two separate directions? I roam there... still waiting.

Waiting.... for your own interpretation of my elaboration... will i ever be able to see it?
Who knows.

Suh Suh SubliminaLs

        

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These poems are sublime,
I do still search, yes after a lifetime possibly more
who
knows.

in that feild where we walked two separate directions? I roam there... still waiting.

Waiting.... for your own interpretation of my elaboration... will i ever be able to see it?
Who knows.

Suh Suh SubliminaLs

great stuff here...
Thank you
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot