Unrequited Love

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Pain and Sorrow

 

Unrequited Love
It starred me in the face
Pierced my lonely soul
Shred my heart in haste

Unrequited Love
I starred into it's eyes
Uncovering its secrets
Believing my own lies

Unrequited Love
Living in the light of day
yet tormented me nights
Love would never play




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Great piece grittier. I saw a

Great piece grittier. I saw a mirror in this. Did you see a mirror when writing it? Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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First Stanza,  I stared  into

First Stanza,  I stared 

into the eyes of lust

and not love

 

The last two, self

reflections , perhaps the

mirror of truth 

 

Smilez!!!!

dannigirl933's picture

I love the brevity use in

I love the brevity use in this and the turn at the end. very well done you.  dannigirl933  


Daniella Nikolayeva

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Thanks daniella, Smilez!!!!

Thanks daniella, Smilez!!!!

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Very poignant!

Very poignant!


Starward

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Thanks for the read starward!

Thanks for the read starward!

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My pleasure!

My pleasure!


Starward