Awakened by a Traveling Rain

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with the ending dream travel,

now laying still in the dark hour,

I am awake on the journey,

with sleep still laying beside me,

the sound telling me the trees outside are full,

full of night lean,

and they have finished their sleep.

I hear their particulars,

the leaves hushing the drops away,

that are now falling,

one on to the other,

on to another again, then again.

the rushing flooding sound alive,

filling the window pane,

pushing the gutters to be become a street

hurriedly, rushing the sleepy darkness away

down the curb- to the dark intersection...

 

~dannigirl933

@Daniella Nikolayeva- posted 1/20/11

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lyrycsyntyme's picture

Having read this, I feel like

Having read this, I feel like your words are the truest photograph on the page. A motion picture, maybe. Absolutely visual to the brim and beyond, full of life and motion.

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wow, thank you os much. you

wow, thank you so much. you are too kind. made me smile this day, again thank you :)


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Starward's picture

Superb!

Superb!


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big smile here, thank you so

big smile here, thank you so much


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.

Really enjoying your works, dannygirl. 


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dannigirl933's picture

thank you, you are making my

thank you, you are making my evening here. :)


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Keep 'em coming! We like!

Keep 'em coming! We like!


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I will post some of the Old

I will post some of the Old ones of mine. not the greatest of writes, but I give it a go


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