Shall We Float



The folks appear giddy enough

Using the scepter of the ghost

Just slashing what conscious

Dissolving a notion in wreck

Through the fog of another

Needles thought and swimming

Toward thickets with berries

Because better seas certainly

Carry seeds to the promiseland

And O what eternal energy

Ends all pontification and O

That seeking is then to realize

Discovering the honor of love

Even whilst in thorny brush

Signifies the blood of our lives

Shall we float into forever 




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lyrycsyntyme's picture

Beautiful poem. I really love

Beautiful poem. I really love the imagery and feeling provided by the verse "using the sceptor of a ghost". The line quickly won me over and took my mind into the rest of your thoughts : )

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I'm so glad you enjoyed it.