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There's a silver in the sky
it keeps netting my eyes

I think I can see
dream flowers planted on thee
and wishes grown into pearl leafed trees
what secrets do you bloom through our reveries?

 

There's a sliver in the sky
and its smiling at me
contagiously

Who else might be gazing at you the way I do?
reflecting back your soft hue
with a touch of their own soul
sewing seeds so true

 

There's a Cheshire cat far in the air
I think hes stuck up there
but he doesn't seem to care

Lets share smiles for a while
bounce them back down and all around
through some time and space
you mirror our night gazer's face

 

There's a graviton pulling at me
I am the bulging tide of the sea

Dear god let me fly
so I may embrace the beauty
up there so high.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Moon gazing thoughts complied from tonight.

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nightlight1220's picture

Beautiful, Astral. Felt like

Beautiful, Astral. Felt like I bounced right off the page onto that gorgeous cresecent moon out there tonight...have you seen it?

or is it where we are?

I thought I saw it up in the sky on my way to work a few minutes ago....hmmmm,

and then I read your poem,

and felt something in my eye.

 

....or was it yours? 

 

This one needs to be read again and again. *smile*

..


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Astral_Tides's picture

I'm not sure what the moon

I'm not sure what the moon phase was when you sent this, but I most likely saw.

The moon is always like a big eye in the sky watching me, and I swear I almost feel it's stare.

Like when you just know someone is eye-locked on you and you turn around and boom.. "...hello...?"

I often have urges to turn my head, or body around and look up and poof, there it is sneaking through the trees.

Stairing at me again.

Anyway, thank you for sharing your thoughts, they're always an absolute pleasure.

There is depth and understanding through your lines that is unique and interesting.

 


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

SSmoothie's picture

just typically gorgeous AT!!!

just typically gorgeous AT!!! I often think of her crescent as a very approving validating smile! beautfule work!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Astral_Tides's picture

Thanks for checking this out

Thanks for checking this out and spending your time my dear.

I wrote this in pieces.

When I would step out for a "thought", I would glazen my eyes of Lunas shimmer

then carry it back to my house of words and unravel the textures.

I think each phase of this was born of different elements observerd.

A bit of an unusual creation next to most of my spasams.


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

ashes_twisted's picture

I agree...

With Poof man here.

 

Something begging to be touched,

but so painfully far away.

Your writes are always a delicate read,

with a cup of hot tea to the soul.

^_^

 


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Astral_Tides's picture

This one was a bit of an

This one was a bit of an anomaly.

I remember this night.

Drawn in 3 seperate plumed exhales.

There was something speaking to the silver within the silver.

Cancer connections happening.

Ripe, yet bittersweet.

A late reply but a thanks for stopping by ; )

 


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 


 

mrpoofs's picture

whoof. beauty flows so easily

whoof. beauty flows so easily from you. so delicate looking, almost begging to be broken, but stronger than a thousand bars of iron.

Astral_Tides's picture

Damnitt poofs your filter is

Damnitt poofs
your filter is astounding.
Just some particles but you can see the universal glaze that connects them.
Quite pleased to receive your audience my man : D


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.