The Shapes Of Spaces Between The Letters

  • I must exist here while dreaming of being anywhere but here. Somebody told me about green grass and now I want to go traveling to find it. Somebody else said stay here and I believed them. I left and came back three times; the grass was wheat colored out there and here it was knee-high and greener than shamrocks or leprechan hats. Sitting here, I sink beneath a weight of words so heavy I only have time enough left to grasp the contours of the shapes between the spaces of the letters. They are all mine and have merit in that they exist without calling too much attention to themselves. Spaces are like that most years. I will try to promote them better, prop them up like mirrors and make myself see that all that black ink is only for show.
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  • Lady A
  • 04-16-18
  • 401a
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Author's Notes/Comments: 

So, how many of you stopped and took a look at the spaces in between? Ahhhhhhh - my work is done! - :D

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stellaluceat's picture

I looked at the spaces

then I got lost in a leprechan shamrock. Now I'm stuck between spaces. :O

allets's picture

shape of spaces

I thought it a reach, glad to reach you - the writer never knows what will or will not net in the reader. thank you for your kind comment - slc (ps, my personal messages are still off - I have to contact admin. ttyl - hugz

 


          

 

fuche_bu's picture

the spaces between the words

the spaces between the words and letters often tells a better story.  What's left unsaid can be as powerful as what is actually written.

SSmoothie's picture

Beautiful reminded me of

Beautiful reminded me of inkstain lovely work! Hugss 


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Proof

U can write a poem about anything. Thanks for the read. - slc