Beneath The Waves of Grief

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Grief battered

by waves of conflict

pulled me down into vortex

deep waters. Loss as a boat

overturned, broke up on

ragged reefs, and sank.

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Bad grief was like the board

that splintered and broke away

to float topside to tell

the shore born that loss

was great here.

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allets

09-23-15

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water poems

delicious simile in the second verse

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lizardking

simile rock. thanks for the comment - yr poempal ~Lady A~

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